Critique my listing - Miriam in San Antonio

Critique my listing - Miriam in San Antonio

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Sarah977
Level 10
Sayulita, Mexico

@Miriam677  Very nice place. But why are you using an off-kilter bathroom photo as your cover photo? 

 

For one thing, photos like that, that distort the space, aren't a good idea. Guests don't like arriving to find that a room that looked huge in the photos, isn't. And the photo is tilted.

 

I would  not play up the luxury aspect so much- it can attract fussy, entitled  guests who'll complain if everything isn't perfect in their minds. And I don't think you need to go on as you have about the cow and horse theme. That's not what people will book for, and those elements are obvious from the photos. Guests tend not to read through all the info, so don't clutter it up with unnecessary descriptions.

 

Beds for 2 people should have a bedside table with a reading lamp on both sides of the bed. Especially if advertised as  "luxury". One person often just wants to go to sleep while the other likes to sit up and read. And both of them need a surface at hand to put their phone, book, jewelry they remove at night, etc. Or needs to turn on the lamp to go to the bathroom at night.

Other than that, the place looks great.

 

There are a couple of typos in your wording- spell check.

 

 

 

 

 

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