Critique & ad overview

[Tony1922]

Hi, As a relative newbie I’d appreciate any advice on my property ad & especially help with ensuring I have the various airb&b headings up to speed & correctly filled in.

if anyone is local wishes to meet up & view then I’d be more than happy. (Coffee would be on me)

thanx 

🌟 Listing link: Rental unit in Burton Joyce · 2 bedrooms · 1 bath

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[Ali21399]

Hi Tony, 

Congratulation for your effort. Your determination will surely pays off in near future.

My suggestion for improvement  as follows:

- Cleanliness is the most impartant aspect of this business. The more furniture you have, more attention to maintain the cleanliness is needed.

- Pricing must be relevant to your target market. Adopt 20% offer for 1 - 2 months to increase take ups, get more review and gain trust. 

- Focus on unique feature of your unie i.e. Location, transportation, tourist  attractions nearby, unuversity, offices etc. Show how your unit can aolve other people needs. Provide more pictures, including surrounding areas. 

Good luck!

[Angela4068]

Place looks great and tidy. About the only thing I could say is maybe try less clutter- if you could remove some pillows and photos from the walls, it may make your rooms look a little bigger and less cluttered. Good luck!