Critique my listing - Akaash in Bhimtal, India

Akaash4
Level 2
Bhimtal, India

Critique my listing - Akaash in Bhimtal, India

Hello Airbnb Family,

 

A newbie here, just dipped my toes into the hosting community. I would like your thoughts, impressions on my Airbnb link. Please be totally honest with regards to:

 

- How better can I improve upon my listing photos and craft an engaging narrative?

- Is my text heavy wall of descriptions, engaging?

- Do you feel as a potential customer, that you desire to stay over at my place after viewing the pictures/descriptions.?

- Anything else that comes to your mind, that I can improve upon, so as to increase my bookings.

 

As per the community guidelines I am attaching my listing picture for your constructive feedback: @Bhumika @Paula 

 

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Link to my listing: 

https://www.airbnb.co.in/rooms/1254360266833971612?source_impression_id=p3_1731330985_P3k0PhP37ucXtz...

 

Thanks in advance, looking for some great feedback from experienced hosts.

 

Best Regards,

Akaash

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