First-time host listing critique :)

[Rawad7]

Hi Everyone, 

I have my first 2 listings in Cozumel, Mexico (links below), and I would be super grateful for your experienced critiques!

One of them has been online for about 10 days, and I still do not have bookings. I know that patience is key here, so I'm staying cool 🙂 

Any tips or critiques you may have would be highly appreciated, so please don't mince your words! Pictures, description, prices, all topics are on the table !

https://www.airbnb.com/rooms/1402265994177746598?adults=3&check_in=2025-07-15&check_out=2025-07-20&g...

https://www.airbnb.com/rooms/1416331527558947667?adults=3&check_in=2025-07-15&check_out=2025-07-20&g...

[Marie8425]

@Rawad7 

Beautiful condos wow!

Suggestions

You have very unique wonderful features, that I think highlighting those instead of the usual pool and such.

Looking at your pictures I was amazed by spaciousness, luxury design and patios off a bedroom should be a highlight, not common.

I would change cover photo ocean view is wonderful but if I have a group of six that incorrectly looks cramped your other photos I am wow.

Especially if a crib offering invest in bedroom smoke detectors.

[Rawad7]

Thank you, @Marie8425 ! Your comments are much appreciated!

I will review which other pictures may be more unique and appealing to use as the cover photo or the first five pictures.  

Reg. the smoke detector, you're right! I have already ordered carbon monoxide and smoke detectors 🙂

Again, thank you so much for taking the time!!

[Marie8425]

@Rawad7 

The picture of the living room that includes the patio.  Big difference looking at 6 people relaxing.  So much seating space and comfort.

[Rawad7]

Thanks @Marie8425 ; took your advice for both properties ! 

[Elegant-Homes-Retreat0]

@Rawad7 Your listings are absolutely beautiful—well done for your first properties! Cozumel is a great market, but standing out early is all about visual storytelling and clear value.

@Marie8425 gave solid tips—especially about the cover photo. That living room with patio view really shows the space and comfort, perfect for groups!

A few quick suggestions:
✅ Make sure your first 5 photos tell a story: wide space, natural light, sleeping comfort, key features.
✅ Highlight local experience in the description—mention walkable spots, quiet nights, or ocean breeze.
✅ Test small price adjustments for visibility in search.
✅ Consider adding “perfect for families/couples/workcations” based on your layout.

You’re off to a strong start—keep going! Bookings will come. 🙌