@Blue-Star-Vacation-Homes-Rental-LLC0 First, I would suggest being very careful of spelling errors. There is one in your request for input. "Linsting" vs "Listing". We like to use grammarly AI checker to be sure our listing is written well.
I would also be careful about using terms like "elegant" as it is completely subjective. One person might think the unit is nice, but not elegant, etc...
You mention a stunning view, but there is only one picture that shows the view. Are there other rooms that see the view or just the one small balcony? There are no pictures of the pool, yet the listing says it's one of the few places with a pool. If that is the case, emphasize it!
I don't know anything about the Dubai market, but I hope the listings pick up soon.
All the best!