Hi @Debra699 - great listings. Really seems like you have an excellent grasp on who your ideal guest is and marketing to that demographic. Here's some general feedback:
- bullets or story telling style - why not incorporate both? Each has it's merits but you could add a bullet list in areas where it makes sense (like under the kitchen description for example). You have a really nice list for local attractions. Personally, I lean toward paragraphs as the rest of how AIRBNB represents info is like a bullet list.
- I have a preference for the lead image on "hollyhaven2" - this exterior looks grander
- this is a bit odd: "Cabin is pet friendly but only allows dogs." I'd just remove all together, you have info on this in other areas so it isn't necessarily needed.
- your guests really seem to be delighted by your extra touches so I might highlight that even more in your description (with a bullet list maybe).
- your reviews - you can consider responding to your reviews with insight into your amenities - for example: "Amazing place and location! Absolutely would stay again. House is clean and beautiful, location is perfect. Debra’s little extras make you feel right at home." You could say: "Thanks for this review (blah blah). So glad you enjoyed the extras, we just added "blah blah". Or "our 'blah blah' are a guest favorite" or "the blah blah are a big hit and I use every time when we are there too". I use my response to guest reviews as a way to speak to future guests thinking about my listing.
Wishing you much success!
