Would love some feedback on my listing!

[Barb26]

Hi fellow hosts!  Would love to have some feedback on my listing.  It's a fairly seasonal market on Whidbey Island, WA but I'd love to see if I can capture more of the off tourist travel and focus on solo with dog travelers, and couples - etc.  Would love to hear more from others who have a little more experience. 

I'd love advice for the listing - photos/listing etc and also advice on the space itself.

There is a bit of an awkwardness of the bathroom/bedroom situation.  There is a trundle in the bedroom so it doesn't offer a lot of privacy but for 1-2 it's great or with kids.

I have thought about replacing the lovely sofa in the living room with a pull out but haven't done that yet.

So this for the top floor unit.  I have a bottom floor unit that will be offering as an add on or possibly separate rentals in a few weeks.  I have another unit which is the cottage (which was a hair salon in the garage and will be ready next year for a solo or duo travelers.)

Thank you in advance!

https://www.airbnb.com/h/perchinthevines

Barb 

[Elisa]

Hi @Barb26 😊, 

It’s great that you asked this in the Community Center!

How many guests would you like to welcome in your listing?

I’m tagging a few hosts who might have advice for you: @Casa-De-La-Tierra0, @Kelly333, @Branko38, @Cindy1764, @Tariq52m, @Supriya29 and @Naomi208.

Thank you in advance, everyone!

[Tiny154]

Hi @Barb26,  thank you for giving us an opportunity to view your lovely home,  it is a huge house with a beautiful view.  I would suggest that you reduce your text,  it is too long for the guests to read and some potential guests might loose interest on the way and stop reading further.  If I were you,  I will have only three paragraphs,  each describing each section and amenities it offers,  

The pictures must explain if they are for the cottage or the loft. 

Let's hear how other hosts will suggest. 

All the best in your dream hosting. 

Regards, Tiny 

[Bhumika]

Thanks @Tiny154 ! Really good point on adding description to the photos as well as updating the amenities section. Host @Tan8380 also shared amazing advise above. What do you think about them? Do you agree with any of those pointers?

@Barb26 , do let us know if the hosts can clarify on any particular point 🌻

[Barb26]

thanks @Tiny154 - good suggestions!

[Tan8380 · Accepted solution]

Hi @Barb26! 😊

Thanks for sharing your listing. From what I can see and from the Airbnb description, it offers great sunlight, cosy vintage vibes, and a welcoming charm for 1–4 guests.
Here’s some actionable feedback organised by listing, photos, space layout, and guest targeting:

Listing & Photos
Maximize natural light shots: Highlight the eastern and southern sunshine in your description and main image (one guest drools over that “bask in the glow of eastern and southern sunlight” line—use it)

Show layout clearly: Provide floorplan sketches or labeled photos to clarify the bedroom/bathroom arrangement. Guests love knowing exactly how the trundle works and what view/privacy to expect.

Show lifestyle shots: If it’s dog-friendly, include a photo of the dog-friendly setup: a bowl, a cosy area for pets.

Add local appeal: Consider a few scenic photos of nearby vineyards or berries to evoke the “vine” in your name.

Space & Layout

Bedroom privacy: The trundle bed offers flexibility but limited privacy. Be upfront in your description that it’s ideal for couples, solo travelers, pet parents, or small families with kids—but less for, say, two unrelated couples. Also, take photos of the sleeping spaces for the "where you'll sleep" photo section.

Bathroom layout: If it feels awkward, explain it gently: “Bathroom shares wall with the trundle—great for kids, groups—but couples be reminded of shared bathroom proximity.” Transparency builds trust.

Consider a pull-out sofa: You mentioned replacing the living sofa with a pull-out. That could allow you to market as a true 3-person unit, but weigh whether losing stylish appeal is worth it. If chosen, make sure the extra bed is comfy and easy to transform.

Targeting Off-Season, Solo & Dog Travelers, Couples

Dog-friendly messaging: Emphasize off-season perks: walks on quiet beaches, cosy evenings in, nearby pet-friendly patios, or dog-walking trails.

Offer add-ons: If your bottom-floor unit becomes available soon, promote combined bookings for small groups or multi-couple retreats. That creates package appeal.

Create packages: Think weekend driftwood-gathering, vineyard strolls, or kayak days with discounts or picnic add-ons.

Adjust pricing seasonally: Lower off-season rates may attract solo travelers or couples. Weekend minimums, flexible cancellation, or midweek discounts encourage bookings in quieter months.

Take out "start a load of towels" no guests wants to put washing on when they are away. Starting the dishwasher is fine.

Also remove the "other things to note" you have 2.

Love the Guests book, plenty of options for guests to explore.

Overall, you have a lovely space!

[Bhumika]

Thanks so much for sharing these amazing tips @Tan8380. I love how you mention adding a local appeal to the listing! Have you added something similar to your listing that stands out according to your guests? 

@Barb26 , what do you think about @Tan8380 's ideas? 

[Barb26]

hi - I think they are great suggestions.  My co-host uses that verbiage in every listing (start a load of towels).  no one has ever said anything about it.  I'd love to hear more on that @Tan8380 

[Tan8380]

Hi Barb, I totally get what you’re saying and I know lots of hosts do it that way. For me though, I prefer not to ask guests to put a load on. I just like to keep check-out as simple as possible for them. Plus, I’ve found it’s easier to catch things like makeup or stains on towels before they go through the wash — otherwise they can slip through unnoticed.

[Bhumika]

Thanks @Tan8380 ! I'll tag @Barb26 so the host receives a notification and can continue the conversation.

Here's a little tip , to notify someone in your comments, just type @ followed by their name—like Barb or Tan and names should appear for easy tagging. This way, they'll get a notification about your message! 😊