critique my listing please

Jinbao-Ling0
Level 2
South Jordan, UT

critique my listing please

Airbnb.com/h/panda404 . Hello please critique my listing. I am a new host in SLC Utah

 

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Andrea6232
Level 10
Bergamo, Italy

Ciao @Jinbao-Ling0 ,

 

just a little tip: show your face in your account, this way you generate more trust in your guests 😉

 

Andrea

James4510
Level 2
West Sacramento, CA

Try this out might be more precise and to the point. 

 

Welcome to a minimalist haven at Brickyard Plaza, where sleek design and comfort seamlessly blend. The master bedroom features a plush king-size bed with blackout curtains for restful sleep, while the living area offers a twin-size daybed, comfortably sleeping up to five guests in total.

The fully-equipped kitchen is ideal for preparing meals, with seating for up to five and a high chair for little ones. Step outside to your private balcony with stunning views, or relax in the shared outdoor lounge area, complete with a fire pit table and pool view.

The bathroom is stocked with essentials like shampoo, conditioner, body wash, and a bidet. Extra blankets, towels, robes, and slippers are provided, along with a queen air mattress for added comfort.

The living area includes a smart TV, soundbar, and a small desk for work. Enjoy the convenience of an in-unit washer and dryer, and unwind with games like chess, Monopoly, and Uno.

Located in Brickyard Plaza, you're just steps from shopping, dining, and easy access to downtown Salt Lake City, with skiing and hiking in the nearby Wasatch Range. Perfect for both business and leisure, this apartment offers the ideal base to explore the city.

 

 

 

 

Paula
Community Manager
Community Manager
Port Moody, Canada

Hi @James4510, I am tagging @Jinbao-Ling0 here so they receive a notification of your message. This way, we increase the chances of them getting back to us.
 
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