critique my listing please

[Jinbao-Ling0]

Airbnb.com/h/panda404 . Hello please critique my listing. I am a new host in SLC Utah

[Andrea6232]

Ciao @Jinbao-Ling0 ,

just a little tip: show your face in your account, this way you generate more trust in your guests 😉

Andrea

[James4510]

Try this out might be more precise and to the point. 

Welcome to a minimalist haven at Brickyard Plaza, where sleek design and comfort seamlessly blend. The master bedroom features a plush king-size bed with blackout curtains for restful sleep, while the living area offers a twin-size daybed, comfortably sleeping up to five guests in total.

The fully-equipped kitchen is ideal for preparing meals, with seating for up to five and a high chair for little ones. Step outside to your private balcony with stunning views, or relax in the shared outdoor lounge area, complete with a fire pit table and pool view.

The bathroom is stocked with essentials like shampoo, conditioner, body wash, and a bidet. Extra blankets, towels, robes, and slippers are provided, along with a queen air mattress for added comfort.

The living area includes a smart TV, soundbar, and a small desk for work. Enjoy the convenience of an in-unit washer and dryer, and unwind with games like chess, Monopoly, and Uno.

Located in Brickyard Plaza, you're just steps from shopping, dining, and easy access to downtown Salt Lake City, with skiing and hiking in the nearby Wasatch Range. Perfect for both business and leisure, this apartment offers the ideal base to explore the city.

[Paula]

Hi @James4510, I am tagging @Jinbao-Ling0 here so they receive a notification of your message. This way, we increase the chances of them getting back to us.

Quick tip: To tag someone, tap "@" and select the host's username from the dropdown menu 😊

[Sattam0]

Hi Jinbao-Ling0,
First of all, congratulations on joining the Airbnb hosting community! I’d love to share some tips to help improve your listing and make it stand out:
1. Lighting and Photography: Your photo looks nice, but you might benefit from brighter natural lighting or wider angles to showcase the space more effectively. Adding multiple photos from different angles can highlight the details of your space.
2. Compelling Description: Write a detailed and engaging description that emphasizes what makes your place special, such as proximity to key attractions or unique amenities.
3. Personal Touches: Adding small decorative touches (like flowers, books, or wall art) can make the space feel warmer and more inviting.
4. Pricing and Offers: As a new host, consider offering special introductory discounts or limited-time offers to attract guests and gain initial positive reviews.
5. Great Communication: Responding promptly to guest inquiries creates an excellent first impression and builds trust.

Best of luck with your Airbnb hosting journey!”