@Stephanie1933 This is a rare occasion in which every single word of a listing's title is precisely wrong for it.
1) "5 [star]" - you have an excellent 4.98 rating for now, which is great, but it's not 5 stars and it probably never will be again because there's nothing even the best host in the world can do to prevent a guest from fussing over minor things. Delete that monstrosity and never think about it again.
2) "Style" - Well I mean, technically all content also has form, so your listing has a style. It looks like a tastefully decorated, comfortable and well-lit space. But I don't think your target guests go to Fashion Weeks - style is not one of their main priorities in choosing a listing.
3) "Comfort" - yes, I can get behind this one. The home is thoughtfully appointed with a lot of comfortable features. But when the photos already convey that, it should be redundant in the title.
4) "Immaculate" - you're basically begging for trouble. Do you really want the kind of guests who would freak out and demand a refund if they spotted a speck of dust? There's not much advantage to overselling your cleaning practices, especially in a time when it's so easy for guests to weaponize them for free stays. Take pride in your high cleaning standards, but don't oversell them.
5) "By Airport & CBD." OK, I've spent a fair bit of time in Christchurch but it was pretty long ago, and obviously you know your lovely hometown better than I do. From an outsider's perspective, you're valuably close to the airport, but slightly suboptimal for guests who want the most convenient pedestrian access to the CBD. Your location is still great, but maybe I'd downplay the proximity to the city center just a tiny bit.
You've already christened this house with the name Sevenoaks, and in this case I think that suits your listing better than the menagerie of luxury buzzwords. I'm not a listing title expert, but I think if you concocted a better version of something like "Sevenoaks: Family-Friendly Hideaway near CHC Airport," it would fit your brand well and attract the best-fitting guests while also setting realistic expectations. The vast majority of guests completely forget the listing titles, so it's not super important to have a perfect one, but you want to make sure your parameters match up well to the types of guests you want to serve.
