@Susan4389 Some people are simply better writers than others. They understand how to present information in an easy to read format, they really think about what would be important for guests to know.
When new hosts post here asking for a critique of their new listing, what I see most often are sparse, incomplete, or not very well written descriptions.
Many hosts tend to give lengthy descriptions that wax lyrical about their properties, what a great stay you can anticipate, etc.- they read more like a real estate ad or an advertisement for a Club Med vacation than a rental ad making the layout of the house, what is provided, and so on, clear.
So I agree with you that many hosts could use some mentoring in understanding what guests in general want to know and how to write an informative description without a lot of extraneous wording.
A guest who is travelling to Paris doesn't need to see photos of the Eiffel Tower, nor read a paragraph mentioning all the touristy places to visit- guests can find that stuff out from a travel book- they presumably already know about the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre.
A few sunset over the lake photos are nice for a lakeside location, but I know guests are more interested to see where they're going to sleep, what the bathroom looks like, or the flight of stairs. Everyone already knows what a lake and a sunset look like.
If you can't glean the information you need from the photos and the description and the amenities list, than about all you can do is send the host an Inquiry message asking about the things that are important to you.