Very inviting listing! Looks great!
Here are my thoughts for improvement.
1. Photos: Write captions that bring interest to the photos. The first shot of the bedroom is perfect, but it's followed by a second shot that's a bit washed out and not as good; I would keep the first shot and delete the second. Take a shot from the balcony looking in. I like some of the close-ups. The balcony is sweet, pick your best shots though; try not to be redundant. The closet photo was a bit confusing to me because I couldn't see the clothes rod and couldn't figure out at first what the photo was about. The first outside photo of the house was shot at a good angle and was interesting; the second one not as good and could be deleted. Same with the photos of the town, pick the best and show some close ups too. In the narative you mention many of the local attractions, so you may want to show more variety with photos of those attractions too, instead of so many of the downtown. You mention your dog and family, maybe a shot of the family with the dog, or one of the dog alone. Airbnb has some photo tips and they mention horizontal shots work best, so reconsider some of your verticals.
2. Listing Title: Give some thought to how you name your listing. What diffierentiates your place from other listings in the area? Also, capitalize all words in the title.
3. Spelling: Double check your spelling.... when mentioning the laundry, the word facility does not have an "s" in it. 🙂
4. Bed Description: In addition to your photo and description of the bed, you may want to add the bed icon that gives people a quick look at the type of bed.
Hope that helps! Good luck!
