I suspect you meant critique, @Ebrahim11, versus criticize.
Having had a quick glance, I'd say you've got too many photos of effectively the same thing, just from different angles. It's also very much focused on the garden, whereas I like to think of (certainly for an entire listing) the house as shot 1 (unless it's ugly, which yours isn't).
Some of the interior shots make it look very overlooked or visible from outside (do you have nets for privacy) and, ideally, I wouldn't have a truck so plainly visible from the inside (maybe take pics from a different angle?).
You've got a frightening amount of wires in pic 16. Any way to today those up? The artistic effect you were going for in pic 17 has been dashed thanks to a slipped cushion!
Pic 26 is a no, a big fat no. Just because.
In conclusion, I'd easily halve the number of photos you've used.
Finally, you have a few typos in your description - worth a re-proof.
That's all from me!