Hi @Claudia873 I had a quick look. Mostly it looks good and your listing description is good except for the last line which I can't figure out- " ....so you A bakery A pharmacy and A bank close by".
I'd change the first photo- the cars in the photo don't look good to me., they ruin the beach view. Inside photos are somewhat blurry and not well-lit. Take a living room photo from a different angle rather than having the windows looking glary. Bedroom photos could also be taken from a better angle, rather than just a straight shot of the bed. There are no photos of the bathroom, guests like to see that. I'd say a few less photos of the view and the beach and more of the interior. I like the photo of the houses looking down the street towards the beach.