I would love someone to critique my listing. I think you do so by posting to this conversation. I’m new and also learning as I go. https://abnb.me/m9LX34KLpub
@Stacy363 the post at the top literally tells you how to go about this. you want to start your own thread so that you get all the comments in one place, as this thread here will end up messy.
Just browsed your 'about this place' and it tells me about the area and nothing about the actual rental space aside from having 'everything you could need' which is very subjective and different for everyone. Get specific: Full kitchen? are bathrooms attached to bedrooms or are they all shared bathrooms? There are 34 photos that should supplement, not replace the descriptions. Think of it as a resume where people may spend 15 seconds on the front page, then maybe browse photos, then maybe open the list of amenities. Just my opinion....