@Pete12 welcome to hosting!
Firstly, I would suggest you think about the order and orientation of your photos. Of course, the first photo needs to be your 'money shot' as it will be the one that shows in the search results. However, the first five photos are also important as they will be the ones displayed on the landing page of the listing, before the guest decides whether or not to check out the others.
So, make sure all five are really strong and in landscape (horizontal) format so that they work with Airbnb's layout and don't get cropped weirdly. I would also recommend you show different areas or amenities in those first five images. At the moment, four of the five show the living area, albeit with the fourth one being the workstation. I would definitely replace one of these with a photo of the bedroom (like the one showing the full bed, but retake this in landscape format) and one with the photo of the view (in landscape format). Although it's fine to have a few portrait (horizontal) photos other than the first five, these are best for detail shots. Rooms (and views) photograph better in landscape.
In the bedroom, swap around the small chest and lamp in the corner with the small table and plant by the bed. Guests will find this a more convenient set up.
Otherwise, the description is clear and the listing looks clean and to have all the basic amenities. However, I think you could highlight some of these, both in your description and in your photos as you find that not all guests read the amenities list (I get questions all the time about whether I have this or that, even though it is clearly listed there).
For example, you could mention in your description that there is free parking and also the TV streaming services, as not all listings will have these. Include a photo of the washing machine. You mention you provide shampoo, soap etc. Get some in nice packaging and include these in photos of the bathroom. This will help to make things look less sparse and for guests to understand that you provide these things.
You have breakfast (and coffee) mentioned as an amenity and I see some breakfast cereals on the counter and milk in the fridge. Do you offer anything else for breakfast? If not, I think you might need to, as that's a bit basic when breakfast is listed. I offer tea, coffee, sugar, honey, breakfast cereals etc. but do not list breakfast as I think guests will expect a bit more.
Or, if you don't want to/can't offer more, then you don't have to, but take breakfast off the amenities list so that guests see what you do provide as a bonus. It's often a good tactic to underpromise and overdeliver, rather than the other way around. For example, at the last airbnb I stayed at, breakfast was not listed as provided, yet there was tea, coffee, sugar, milk, cereals, fruit, yoghurts, bread etc. This earned the host rave reviews.
RE pricing, I don't know enough about your area to comment really (perhaps some local hosts might be able to advise you on that), but it doesn't seem at all expensive to me, so I am guessing that's not your problem. Still, if you haven't done so already, check out what comparable listings in your area are charging. Don't rely on Airbnb's Smart Pricing as it usually prices far too low.
Your review so far are excellent. The only category letting you down is location. Do you have any idea why? I see you have described the distance to the sights and transport options and that it's a quiet neighbourhood. Is there something else about the location that could be putting guests off? If so, you should probably mention this somewhere in your listing so that there are no 'surprises'.
For example, I found that I got better location ratings once I specified that it was an urban, multi-cultural, multi-income neighbourhood. I found this necessary as many foreign visitors coming to London for the first time were expecting everyone to look like Hugh Grant and be sitting around having high tea at 4pm.
Hope that helps and good luck!
