Hi @Michelle4009
Lots of great advice already from other Hosts! A few things to consider:
Addl Guest Fees
Any addl fees on your listing could cause an issue. Airbnb has received alot of bad press about "fees" of any kind. Right now you need bookings and anything that is stopping guests from booking your place could be an issue. Looks like you have addl guest fees after 2 guests? I would remove that for now until you get some bookings. Consider not having addl guest fees for the future as well or only adding for the 4th guest.
Amenities
You say you have a BBQ grill but there is no photo of it? Outdoor space is important to guests for sure. I would include a picture of grill. The rule is if you have an amenity you need a photo of it. If you have a photo of an amenity, it should be included in your amenities list.
Back Yard
You have a great back yard but only one photo of it? I would definitely take more photos of the outdoor space and add to lising. Many properties do not have the great space you have, plus it's fully fenced. I would take some photos at twilight with all the lights on inside house and outside. Take from multiple angles looking back towards the house and include grill in photo (cover off). Keep the table set.
Captions On All Photos
Put captions on ALL your photos. Your photos tell the story of your listing and answer any questions the guest might have about the space. Many guests won't read your description, but will look at your photos.
Cover Photo
You need an exceptional cover photo. The kitchen photo is nice, but I think if you can get an excellent twilight photo of the back yard looking towards the house with all the lights on, that would make a better cover photo. Make the kitchen photo you have now as your number 2 photo.
Wishing you much success!