Hi Matt, I'm a Rental Marketer and feel your pain when it comes to writing a detailed and enticing listing description. Many people struggle with their listing descriptions, so hiring someone to write your listing may be an answer. Copywriters can work magic for your listing, or get inspired by reading other luxury listing descriptions prior to writing your own.
Change your listing title to reflect luxury. "Flat in Mayfair" is a generic title a guest would skip over in a saturated market. Per ABNB, don't use capitals in title words that don't need to be capitalized; research this if you have questions.
Here's one quick rewrite that hopefully inspires your listing details:
Exquisite heart of Mayfair flat walking distance to Hyde Park, shopping
Enjoy luxury living in the heart of Mayfair! Situated on a charming pedestrian high street, our stylish flat overlooks some of the most exclusive designer boutiques in the world. Indulge in the ultimate high-end shopping experience just outside your doorstep, including Savile Row. Retire after a long day in the elegant and sophisticated living space with fully-stocked kitchen.
As you step inside, you will be greeted by a stunning reception. The sleek, modern design is complemented by premium furnishings and luxurious amenities, ensuring a truly indulgent stay. Relax in air-conditioned comfort as you catch up on your favourite shows with Sky TV and Netflix, available at your fingertips.
The location of our flat is unparalleled - just a stone's throw away from Oxford Street, Hyde Park, and Buckingham Palace, you'll be able to explore London's most iconic landmarks with ease. Take a stroll through the lush greenery of Hyde Park or marvel at the opulence of Buckingham Palace, all within a short 20-minute walk.
Our flat spans a generous 603 sqft, providing generous space for you to unwind and enjoy your stay in complete comfort. High-end furniture and bedding provide ample comfort. Whether you're here for business or pleasure, our Mayfair flat offers a luxurious and convenient home away from home. Experience the pinnacle of refined living and book your stay with us today.
Best of luck!