Your link does not seem to work, maybe try again?
But we can see your listing via your profile (just cannot ”like” it.)
The place and the ad looks great!
I did not see it before your redecoration, but the way it looks now, it would certainly catch my interest.
Personally, I prefer clear ”matter-of-fact” description texts, like yours. Short sentences and bullet points. You can easily see what the place offers (and not).
In one place it says ”10 people”, in another ”sleeps 8”.
Hope you will now be able to attract the right kind of guests!