Hi @Alissa125
Your listing is amazing and you seem to have covered all bases. Just a couple of suggestions if I may. Like all of us your rules include no parties. Maybe change the words “party barn” to something like “games room”. Also your description is good, it’s factual, but you could jazz it up to make your place sound like that dream getaway for family groups or friends. (Like the real estate ads 🙂 if you get my drift).
if you’re desperate for more bookings and more positive reviews, maybe run a few specials on pricing to give it a good kick start. It does take a while to build it up and getting as many good reviews under your belt will be helpful. It took me 3 years to build mine to peak and then covid struck so I had to rebuild again after that.
One last thing is guests love the special touches. Eg. Do you leave marshmallows for the fire pit? I leave some snack foods, biscuits, chocolates, jar of lollies and sometimes a drink like juice, cordial etc. (I don’t go overboard, just suggestions). Even a basket with breakfast food could be good, packets of cereal, breakfast bars, fruit etc. If it’s a longer booking you could leave a bottle of wine. I went through a stage of leaving a small platter. Is your pantry stocked? I have milk, butter, spreads, jam, salad dressing, tomato/bbq sauce in the fridge. In the pantry the usual coffee and teas (one or two interesting teas also), honey, cereal, and whatever else you might think of. These are just ideas but even though guests don’t always consume a lot of it, I always get positive comments about that. The initial outlay might cost a bit, but after that it’s only a matter of topping up.
I hope I’ve given you some helpful ideas.
Best of luck!!!
Rosanna