@Ashley1441
In your description, you state: "NO parties/events", but underneath that, you have written "Open concept kitchen, stock with pots, pans, and utensils ready for you to host your gathering."
The word gathering bothers me. You have the kind of place that may well attract partiers, so I would do all I can to avoid that. When you say gathering, do you mean only the guests who have booked? In that case, just end that bit with utensils and take out the last bit.
If you mean it's okay for guests to have visitors and entertain, are you sure about that? What a guest claims was 'just having a few friends and family over' can very swiftly escalate into a party, angry neighbours, damage to your lovely apartment and maybe even being delisted by Airbnb. Just don't go there. Be absolutely crystal clear that no one outside of the booked guests are allowed in the listing. No visitors etc.
In your getting around section, you give distances in times. Are these driving times? Public transport? Does traffic vary according to the time of day. Be specific about what you mean and also, it's a good idea to include actual distances to avoid confusion. I used to just say I was a five minute walk from the station, but then had a guest complain that it was ten minutes. I guess she was a slow walker! Some guests have said it is only three...
Other than that, your listing looks well written to me.
Your listing looks nice and bright and very well presented and the photos are good quality. Just two things:
- Toilet seat down!
- Remember the first five photos are the ones that show on the listing landing page before guests choose to click on more photos or not, so make sure these are the ones that really count and show five different areas or aspects that you think best self the listing. At the moment, you have two of the kitchen and three of the living area.
