@Lynne407 Like Linda, I'm not familiar with pricing in your area, the competition, so hard to know if Airbnb guests find it expensive or what.
Your listing looks fine to me, the place is lovely, your descriptions are good, all the necessary information seems to be there. The only thing I would do differently is to retake some of the photos. They are taken in that real estate format that distorts the space and makes it look larger than it actually is. It's better to take a few photos of the space from different angles than to try to get it all in the frame by taking the sort of photos you have now. A bed photo, for instance, is much more inviting taken from closer up, so guests feel like they want to crawl into it. Same goes for a comfy chair people could picture curling up in with a book.
I've read complaints from guests before about listings looking much more spacious in photos than in reality.
But I don't think that would have anything to do with low bookings through Airbnb as compared to other platforms. I really don't know what the discrepancy might be, but I know people tend to book more through one platform vs. another, depending on what area of the world you live in.
Quite honestly, the more you can build up your direct bookings the better. Airbnb isn't an easy company to deal with if you expect anything more than to use them as a listing site. Once you get into needing assistance with a bad guest, or refunds, or damages, they are endlessly frustrrating to deal with.