@Avijit1 Your listing is in a very popular and hip location that basically sells itself, but you've still gone the extra mile to write up a very thorough description. Two edits I would suggest:
1) Remove "dedicated to young professionals, couples, & business travelers" from the opening sentence. It sounds needlessly snobby and biased; the message it conveys is "Yuppies Only."
2) In the FAQ, your answer to "who else lives in the apartment" could use a bit more detail besides just the body count. Anything you could convey about your lifestyle and the vibe in the common areas would go a long way toward making the listing feel more like a homestay than just a place to sleep (though plenty of NYC tourists are fine with the latter).
When you get a chance, I recommend re-shooting all of your photos in daytime with full natural light and removing the duplicates. It makes a huge difference - just look at these two pictures of the same room. The first one looks spacious, warm, and comfortable. The second one looks like a cramped basement or a college dorm. It's all about the light.