Critique my listing - Dragonwood, Maine, United States

Critique my listing - Dragonwood, Maine, United States

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Would someone like to look at my listings and tell me how I can improve them? 

 

🏡 Dragonwood Family Retreat

🏡 Dragonwood Main House

🏡 Dragonwood Bunk House

 

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Rebecca
Community Manager
Community Manager
Suffolk Coastal District, United Kingdom

Hi @Snapdragon1 👋

 

I hope you don't mind, I added your links to your listings, as well as a photo of all 3 and edited the title a little bit. Hopefully, this will get some more Hosts to your thread, and they'll be easily able to access your listings too! (It makes it so much easier for them when all the information is there!) 

 

I'll keep and eye on the thread and tag some Hosts in if they don't come along soon! 🤗

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Emily2294
Level 1
Cary, NC

HI! I love your Maine house. It's what grandma's lake house feels like for me. 😊I am a marketing expert working on building this listing optimization skill for my clients (I'm newer to the listing improvements) but would love to help if I can. 

 

- I would change your header to reflect the type of house people are looking for summarized in a succinct 4 -5 word phrase (50 character count max), something like:  2 Cabin Retreat Meant for Big Family Memories, or Lo-Fi Wooded Oasis Perfect for Reunions.

 

- If you shift your photos around and put the shot of both houses at the top of the hill first that would convey how much space is available for large groups. Then the deck photo (although maybe add more furniture) and one of each of the main spaces after that and then pics of the outdoor spaces. At the end add the pictures of the activities together so it tells the story of what can you do here all in one group of visuals. Think of it like storytelling. Set the scene, explore the place, do the fun things. 

 

- If you get to choose what is shown first on the list of three amenities (I don't know if you do) I wonder why you choose to put dedicated workspace first. Do people often come to work at your house? If they don't, then maybe choose another way to share that you have Wi-Fi because that will still be important information for travelers to know right away. 

 

-  Your description is large blocks of text that look intimidating to read. If you used more bullets and tried to condense what you are trying to say that might be helpful. I put it into AI with a custom prompt and here is what it gave me: 

 

Escape to Dragonwood: Your Perfect Retreat in the Woods of Maine

 

Discover the enchanting embrace of nature and genuine Maine hospitality at Dragonwood. Whether you're planning a family getaway, a reunion, or a celebration, Dragonwood offers the perfect blend of adventure and relaxation in the serene Maine woods.

 

A Nature Lover’s Paradise


Waterfront Adventures: Explore the beauty of Manhanock Pond with:
- Two docks
- Paddleboat
- Swim raft
- Fleet of kayaks

Stay Connected: Enjoy high-speed Starlink internet if needed.

 

Comfort and Charm
 Main House: Sleeps up to 9 guests with:
- Rustic elegance and modern amenities
- Cozy fireplace
- Three ensuite bedrooms

 

The Bunkhouse: Accommodates up to 16 guests with:
- Fully equipped kitchen
- Large dining table
- Living area and bathroom
- Mix of bunk, trundle, and queen beds
- Balcony with stunning views

 

 

Endless Activities and Amenities
- Outdoor Fun: Enjoy bocce, kayaks, a confidence course, meditation gardens, and outdoor games.
- Local Perks: Complimentary golf at Piscataquis Country Club and access to Community Fitness in Guilford.

 

Event Hosting: Celebrate at Thunder Hall, our 30’ x 40’ pavilion, or The Haven, a 30’ x 30’ indoor hall, with full event services including setup, cleanup, and catering options.

 

Personalized Service
- Concierge Assistance: Our dedicated Director and Concierge, Carrie, is here to make your stay unforgettable. From activity planning to décor and catering, Carrie ensures your vacation vision comes to life.
- Special Events: Hosting an event? We provide tables, chairs, place settings, a sound system, and more. Additional services like a self-serve drink table and packed lunches for adventurers are available.

 

Create lasting memories at Dragonwood, where nature, comfort, and exceptional service come together for an unforgettable experience.

 

I hope that helps! If you want Instagram advice let me know I'm @dataleddesigns_STR

 

Thanks, Emily 

Thank you, Emily this is great advice.