You may get better results if your personal information was not all in caps and your personal photo didn't show two humans barely discernible. Otherwise you should on your way.
I would drop the photo (2nd one) of the house so close to another, you have better ones further down and eliminate the repeats showing the same thing from a different angle. Visitors are not home inspectors, they just need to get the 'idea', the feel, which in your case should be a good one.
Hey Paul, your property looks great! I'm happy to look over the listing with you to review all your settings to make sure you're set up correctly in a way that the Airbnb algorithm likes. Let me know if you'd like to book a quick review session:
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