@Laurence249
Hi - a few suggestions
First the place looks great, and on first glance the sort of place I would book, however as I look through t he photos I would change my mind for the following reasons:
- there are not enough photographs of the property. I see only one bedroom, yet you say there are two. I would also make the bed in the first bedroom as it looks a bit messy
- the terrace is lovely but unusuable as there is no garden furniture so its just an empty space. A nice lounger or all weather wicker seating and table set would make this great You reference a BBQ pit and table etc but I can't see anything, So perhaps a better photo of the terrace with the furniture etc
- the living room has one sofa and nothing else. I dont see how 4 people could use it - 2 on the sofa and 2 where? Two small armchairs and a small coffee table would make it seem cosy and welcoming
- the pic of the bathroom is lovely but cold - a pile of white fully towels etc make it feel welcoming
Overall I guess the place looks great if these pics were for an estate agent, but people looking for quality want to feel pampered and you can do this easily by make the place a bit more warm and appealing
Hope that helps - good luck