@Jason1704 Your place looks nice.
A few comments:
You have repeated word for word the same information in the introduction and "The Space" section right below it.
Use the first section to paint a general picture of the listing and the area, and the space section to describe the layout of the house.
Are those uncovered box springs on the beds? If so, that won't work- they will get dirty and stained. They need to be covered with something you can take off and wash.
I would get a couple of comfortable chairs for the living room, so there is a conversation area for the 4 guests you list for, rather than just the couch facing the TV with the love seat way over at the other end of the room. A coffee table is also needed. The area rug placement looks odd. I'd move it more to the center of the living room.
I find there are too many redunddant outdoor photos. I'd pare those down.