Please be gentle ....

Emmanuel1577
Level 2
London, United Kingdom

Please be gentle ....

.......and help critique my listing.

 

Just started so a lot to learn and probably improve, but it would be interesting to get some 1st impressions and feedback for "SliDoor".

 

Rental unit in Greater London · 2 bedrooms · 3 beds · 2 baths https://www.airbnb.com/rooms/1207816308572278186?viralityEntryPoint=1&s=76

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Emma-Jane-And-Matt0
Level 2
Mornington, Australia

Hello Emmanuel,

What a cute little pad in a great location!

Personally - I'd go through your 78 pics and choose maybe 15- 25 really great ones.

You have repeated the same photos.

Potential guests need to be wowed in the first few seconds Take photo's in natural light, if possible and maybe then edit them - crop and adjust brightness.

 

 

Kia272
Level 10
Takoma Park, MD

@Emmanuel1577  Actually, the pictures need a TON of work. There is so much repetition in the pics, so many duplicates, I couldn't make it through all of them. I also have NO idea how big or small your flat is, how the rooms relate to one another, and basically anything else about the space. You need somewhere between 20-30 pics. 

 

It started with about 10 pics of your living room(?), and I still have no idea how big or small the space is (it looks very small). 

 

Most of the pics have no captions- use the captions! Take pics of the whole room! 

 

In the About This Space area, describe the space. The actual space! Not the neighborhood or the age of the building. Describe the bedrooms and living space, and where they are in relation to one another. 

Use the captions with the pics so guests know what they are looking at. And think about capacity. Do you really want 6 guests in there? Higher capacity isn't always better. 

You also have no check-out time listed. 

 

You would benefit from looking at some other listings in your neighborhood that have good ratings and solid bookings, and mimic some things from their listings, adapted to your own. 

Good luck.