request critique my listings- Melissa in Wisconsin, US

Melissa2463
Level 2
Milwaukee, WI

request critique my listings- Melissa in Wisconsin, US

Am I able to ask for a critique of my 3 listings?  I'm very new to this Airbnb business.  All of my listings were recently posted live and I haven't had much action on any of them.  How is the description?  Any suggestions/tips/tricks to increase bookings? 

 

https://www.airbnb.com/rooms/1013070438637043437?guests=1&adults=1&s=67&unique_share_id=58786c1e-18b...

 

https://www.airbnb.com/rooms/988574616066259819?guests=1&adults=1&s=67&unique_share_id=fc6b2bef-3cbf...

 

https://www.airbnb.com/rooms/988574603141180203?guests=1&adults=1&s=67&unique_share_id=638adbb9-c6b3...

 

#listing feedback

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Paula
Community Manager
Community Manager
Port Moody, Canada

Hello @Melissa2463, welcome to the Airbnb Community Center 😊

 

It's wonderful to see you initiating your "Critique My Listing" thread. I'm reaching out to some of our amazing Hosts to ask for their feedback on any of your listings:  @John7474@Lorina14@James3814@Paula2563 @Matthew1964 and @Jason2389 

 

All the best,

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@Melissa2463 Great job overall.  Here is what I would suggest for all 3 of the listings:

 

1.  Simplify your descriptions!  They are way too wordy.  When people click on an add, they want to see the highlights of the property and if it has what they need.    They don't have time to read all that.  They need highlights.  I would be sure to add in your description what freeways you are close to, and what proximity you are to the closest airport.    

 

2.  The bedrooms are cold and have no appeal.  People want it to feel homey, cozy.  Pictures on the walls, color, rugs, chairs to put their things on, hooks to hang things on.  Put some thought into what you would want to walk into.  I love to buy little extra things to welcome my guests.  I make a welcome sign with their name on it (on my cricut maker), and a basket of goodies, sometimes a vase with fresh flowers.   Personalize your places, it goes a long way !   They want to feel very welcome, not feel like they are staying at a cold hotel.  (feel free to check out my listing for ideas).

 

3.  Some of the furniture is definitely outdated.  The glass/brass table, the table acting as a coffee table with the little handle in one of them.  Those tables have to go 😕  sorry !      I would just remove those tables, and if you replace them, put something inviting on the tables.  Whether it be magazines, a plant, or something decorative.  Make it more homey 🙂 

 

4.  The title of the property doesn't need to have the location in it.  Just something descriptive.  They can see the location in a different spot, and they are already searching that area.  

 

5.  The bedrooms need to have more white.  If linens are white, they will know that they are clean.  Less color on the bed, more neutral colors.    People want clean & crisp ! 

 

The good positive things:  The pictures taken are of good quality !    I also like how you added pictures of things that are around town, but maybe limit those to 1 or 2.   You want the focus to be your place not the town.      

 

Some good tweaking and you've got it 🙂  

Good luck ! 

@Paula @Melissa2463 

 

Hello Melissa -

 

Happy New Year!   

 

Congrats with your three listings! 

 

I think you have done a good job with your photos and listing!  

 

My best advice is to prepare and be patient.  Prepare by double checking everything, and making sure everything is in order.  Be patient, as it can take a moment or two for bookings to happen.  

 

I have been hosting for just over a year, and I too am always looking and asking others for ways to improve my listing.  

 

Wishing you all the best in your journey!

 

Best,

 

John

 

 

 

Hi @Melissa2463 

 

 

Welcome to Airbnb! Upon checking your listing, I must say you have a nice place. The description looks good, but I would suggest highlighting any unique features or amenities. Adding some details about nearby attractions or transportation options could help attract more guests. You could also mention any special touches or local recommendations to make your listing stand out.

 

Additionally, consider adding more high-quality photos to showcase the best aspects of your property. Offering competitive pricing and sharing positive reviews from your previous guests can also boost your chances of getting more bookings.

 

I hope these tips help! Good luck with your Airbnb business! 🏠🌟