Congratulations @Karen4298 You seem to be doing well.
Just some suggestions:
500 ssqq feet and bathroom off the bedroom would not be ideal for 4 adults haha.. Don't present that way. Maybe a couple with one kid on a floor mattress would work?
Usually when people mark lower on location, I am a brain picker so I ask. I had a rental very busy because Honolulu, I thought I was clear but not to everyone there are areas in Honolulu that are still very tropical in the city but that also means that you don't have city conveniences 5 minutes away maybe 10 or 12 minutes but not walking. I had to present it positive but set right expectation.
You got dinged on cleanliness but like every review raves about how clean. I think this is minor things again like having a shower curtain. I don't think anything is dirty but stupid things like that a guest will ding you. Does the kitchen have a sponge , dish towel and pot holders?