You don't have a profile photo which will put some guests off from booking with you. @Naila18
if you are letting two rooms in your home you need a separate listing for each room.
you have included little information about your location/local attractions/you haven't described the accommodation in terms of shared and the private space.
you need to say what sort of guests your place is suitable for and paint a picture for them of why they should stay with you.
some guests won't necessarily want to interact much with hosts some will so perhaps temper your description about how you interact with guests
if you want to provide dinner then offer it for an extra cost
if you offer breakfast you'll need to cater for allergies and diets . Many hosts don't offer breakfast .
look at what other hosts in your location with similar properties to see how they describe their listings