@Shideh1 Not much to critique, it is a lovely place. About all I would change (actually eliminate) is the duplicity of the picture of the beds or what appears to be duplicity; it is not necessary to show each one, it is not a home inspection but just enough photos for the looker to 'get the picture'.
I would also caution on allowing 12 guest in a 5-bedroom place (at the same price), much to loose and nothing to gain; after all who travels to a secluded, quiet 'golf-course' neighborhood with 12 people in tow? Perhaps 8 (or 10) will more than suffice and easier to lessen the risk to such a lovely place. Always be aware of potential party animals.
And if so, make the pool area easy to use by 8-10 people with a welcoming seating arrangement around a BBQ, under a gazebo (??) making the outdoor area just as usable and welcoming as the interior (where a gaming table for adults may be missing).
Just random thoughts. Good luck.