Please critique my listing in Nairobi, Kenya

[Inka179]

I m fairly new to AirBnB and would invite members to critique this listing. 

https://airbnb.com/h/inkastay

All feedback is most welcome and will be considered. 

[Fred13 · Accepted solution]

@Inka179  I found your post enlightening, lush countryside and a very cool place

The outside photo of the building may be best to show as #1 (out of the first 5), but just once; then the pool as #2 and then next 3 to serve as a representative sampling of the interior. Now you got them highly interested. 🙂

[Bhumika]

On a completely different note, @Inka179 , love the yellow pillows, curtains and chair 😍 .

( Won't deny that yellow is my favorite color and how I believe that adding yellow to decor, makes the living room so vibrant😆.)

[BBCor0]

@Inka179 The thing admire me a lot is painting above yellow pillows, love this arrangement and eye catchy outside view.