Hello Ben,
I would recommend a more detailed description of the amenities and items your home provides, including tv channels (Roku or cable?), kitchen ware or bedding. Write from the perspective that someone who cannot see your photos wants to learn more about your home.
I also noticed that you have items on the kitchen shelves that are decorations, not for kitchen use. I recommend moving those items to other areas of the home where they won't take up valuable shelving space.
Here's a rewrite of your description:
Located in the heart of Halifax, Tide's End is the perfect getaway for your next adventure. This cozy loft features two queen beds in separate bedrooms, as well as a queen size sofa bed in the living room, one full bath, a well-appointed kitchen, and a cozy living room with big windows.
Built in the 1920s, Tide's End is a unique blend of vintage charm and cottage-style amenities that will make you feel right at home. The entryway boasts murals completed by a local artist, creating a seaside feel and providing ample storage for your footwear and jackets.
Both bedrooms are well-appointed with new linens, while the kitchen is fully equipped with all the essentials for cooking your own meals or enjoying takeout. The central location of Tide's End is unbeatable, with easy access to downtown, universities, pubs and restaurants, the Boardwalk, and the Halifax Commons. If you prefer to leave your vehicle at home, the loft is conveniently located near a bus route, and everything is within walking distance.
Tide's End Loft also features a private entrance with keypad lock and one parking spot. For longer stays, guests can access laundry facilities in the basement. Additionally, the loft has a sofa bed for extra sleeping space if needed, and there is additional parking available on Dublin Street if required.
Don't miss out on this charming and comfortable getaway in Halifax. Contact us if you have any questions!
Best of luck!
