Hey Tee,
lifelong New Yorker, here. That's a great price for that location and I would TOTALLY consider staying there next time I go home to see my mother! Three issues stand out:
1) you refer to it as a three bedroom apt and that up to two people can rent the room. But there's no picture of the room! You have to
show a pic of the bedroom, if the sun shines as brightly through it as the LR window, I hope there's a curtain or shade on it.
2) If you're in one bedroom, and this is a listing for one other, then who's in the third bedroom? A roommate? Another renter? That is something anyone renting a private room will want to know.
3) a couple of snapshots of very nearby restaurants wouldn't hurt, definitely add a shot of Citibike rack (preferably when it's full of bikes) and ABSOLUTELY name the subways that the apartment is close to, and if they're express, say so.
Good luck!