@Beth6772
Your description is great.
I would double check because the listing is set as pet friendly which you don't want.
Instead of 8 guest, I would try 6, You have enough beds but comfortable dining or seating in the Livingroom doesn't look accommodating for 8 adult guests
Maybe use one of your other living room photos as the cover, some of your others just show the spaciousness better.
For your kitchen pictures guests like to see the appliances so a picture hat includes liked the dishwasher and microwave.
I don't know if already used but the Airbnb New Host Discount really helps you get some reviews.