@Liz6313 In general, I believe you've done an amazing job, especially considering this is your first property. I appreciate the attention to detail, the quality of the pictures, the provided information, and the inclusion of the map with the "you are here" feature. The photos of the healthy food restaurant are particularly appealing to me; overall, I admire the effort.
However, I wouldn't personally select this house for myself. It feels so intricately detailed and personal that I would sense I'm intruding into someone's private space. Unlike in a hotel where the atmosphere is more detached, here it seems like I'm entering a space that's not quite a home away from home. I would suggest minimalizing a bit by cleaning up and removing some personal items to create a more welcoming space for guests.
I found the toy cabinet, overloaded bookshelves, and packed kitchen drawers to be a bit overwhelming. It's just too much, and I'd feel uncomfortable in such a setting.