@Tiva19 I read that review you are referring to, and yes, it's hard to read without paragraphs.
But it's really far too long, anyway. I know you were trying to be comprehensive, but most guests won't read through a review that long, even if it was divided up.
Try to condense your comments next time, looking at what could all fall under the same statement, rather than being so detailed. What most guests really just want to know is if the place was clean and comfortable, if the host was responsive to any issues or messages, if it was accurately described.
If there are a few specific things that you feel bear mentioning, just try to keep it brief. And if it's something the host already mentions in the listing info, no need to mention it in the review. For instance, if it can be noisy, but the host notes that in the listing, future guests shouldn't be surprised or upset, if they read the info provided, which is their responsibility.