Hello @Michelle3577
What a lovely property Michelle😍 and I agree with you that the description could do with some editing. I use bullet points in my description because I have learned from other hosts that most guests don't read anything and it's best to keep it short and sweet. Highlight what stands out in your property and give them a reason to book with you.
A lot of what you describe could be added under the pictures which people DO look at!!
Take a look at the hosts listings that who reply to you and see how they go about describing their property to see if you find any inspiration there😉
There are also some great tips on the Airbnb site on how to set up your listings and also some great videos on the net that I found very useful. The description is something that I tweak regularly, making it shorter rather than longer every time!
All the best
Joëlle