Please critique my listing

[Kevin3113]

I'm looking for any sort of constructive criticism, value added tips etc. 

- https://www.airbnb.com/rooms/999296562019512845?guests=1&adults=1&s=67&unique_share_id=0cbf8b2d-dd65...

- https://www.airbnb.com/rooms/1028296374473223363?guests=1&adults=1&s=67&unique_share_id=ca28b477-47a...

Thank you so much in advance!

[Liza3667]

Your home is lovely. Here are my suggestions from a middle aged Brit. The title is very vague. Say bedroon, not BDR. Seven miles from "downtown" is too far. And what does downtown mean? Europeans don't use this term. Say the neighbourhood in the title. Franklin Park looks nice. What public transport is there in to town?

Put the rail under the TV for symmetry.  Delete clothes storage, iron, hanger etc. Put less in the list so guests feel they get more for their money so give high reviews.

I love dogs and they are welcome in my home. For Brits though, Pit Bulls or "types" are illegal as they are considered dangerous dogs. Can the dog be kept out of the way of guests?

[Rebecca]

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[Jana1479]

I just love your modern style. Your listing is awsome! Jana