Hi @Debra809 ,
You've got such a lovely home! I can tell from the photos that you put a lot thought into the design to make it so cohesive! And I love the name! It's clever and really delightful!
I also think your description is pretty solid - just 2 suggestions for you:
## DESCRIPTION ##
This is not your typical crowded Destin high-rise. Rather than saying this isn’t a “typical crowded Destin high-rise,” I’d focus on what it is: What's the vibe? Does the building feel quiet? Is it buzzing with activity 24/7? Is it popular with couples, families, or longer-term guests?
Totally Beachin' located in East Pass Towers has a more residential feel ...how so? What specifically makes it feel more like a private home than a high rise? .... placed in the most beautiful setting. A detail or 2 would be wonderful here - what makes this "the most beautiful setting"?
## About the Space ##
Right now, this section focuses almost entirely on nearby attractions and says very little about the home itself. I’d recommend leading with the space: what you love about it, what makes it comfortable, and what guests tend to appreciate most. After that, you can absolutely include a shorter summary of things to do nearby.
This is your opportunity to sell the experience of staying in your home — not just the location.
I included some descriptions (below) I found when I searched properties in Destin, FL. You can see that some are long, some are short, some use cute icons, some don't. I'm not sure there's a right or wrong here - you have to keep in mind who your demographic is and make sure you are talking to them "in their language.'
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I’d also strongly consider retaking your photos or hiring a photographer. The current photos are fine, but I don’t think they do justice to the space.
Several images are taken from very low or very high angles, which can make rooms feel distorted or smaller than they are. There are also a few closeups — like the living room table and rug — that don’t give guests useful context about the space.
A helpful approach is to photograph the home the way you’d show it to a potential guest during a walkthrough. Take photos from a natural standing height. Show the full room, then add 1 or 2 alternate angles if that adds value. When you include closeups, make sure they communicate something meaningful about how the space feels — not just a detail in isolation.
For example, the kitchen sink photo works beautifully because it mirrors what a guest actually sees when they enter the space.
Lighting matters too. Natural light will always show colors and textures best, so shoot on a bright day when possible, and don’t hesitate to turn lights on even during daylight hours. If the evening ambiance or view is a selling point, a few nighttime shots can work well too.
What I do: I take myself on a tour of the house and for every photo I ask myself: What am I trying to show guests with this image? What am I trying to tell them? What do I want them to know - and why?
## ABOUT THE SPACE - Examples I found from other homes in the area ##
EXAMPLE:
Our home comfortably hosts up to 8 and is fully stocked with everything you'll need for the whole family for the perfect beach vacation. Small dogs are welcome.
3 mins to Beach Access
8 mins to Henderson Beach State Park
20 Gulfarium Marine Adventure Park
25 mins to Destn-Fort Walton Beach Airport
Bedrooms:
* The spacious, primary king suite opens directly to the lanai back porch, and includes an attached bath with soaking tub, rain shower, tv, and walk in closet.
* A second king bedroom provides another spacious private retreat with work station, closet and adjacent bath.
* Third bedroom queen bed, tv, and walk out to back porch.
Noteworthy Features:
☀ Sleeps 8: 3 bedrooms, 2 kings, 1 queen, 1 pull out queen sleeper sofa
☀ 2 full bathrooms. Primary bath with spa soaking tub
☀ Modern and well-equipped kitchen
☀ Elegant dining area and large kitchen island
☀ Relaxing screened in back porch with grill and fire pit
☀ Resort-style community amenities
☀ 6 person Golf Cart included in your stay
☀ Washer and Dryer
☀ Pet Friendly
EXAMPLE:
Entire House that includes: Master with King Bed, 2nd and 3rd bedrooms with queen beds, 4th bedroom with queen over queen bunks. The house has three full bathrooms, one being in the master bedroom). Private pool, private beach access, 3 Community Pools (1 with a hot tub and splash pad, as well as a community shuffle board, tennis courts, and basketball hoop.
Beach Access: our neighborhood has 2 beach accesses - the first being the private beach access on The Gulf. This access is about a 8-10 minute walk through our neighborhood. La Dolce Vita offers beach chair and umbrella set ups (from mid March - October), and the infinity community pool and hot tub are located here. The second access is a 7 minute walk through the Dunes near The East Pass.
EXAMPLE:
Step inside this updated single-level cottage featuring neutral coastal décor, 9-foot ceilings, washer and dryer, and a fenced in private back yard with grill for enjoying the beautiful gulf breeze and warm sunny days
Enjoy a bright, open living room with a 70” Smart TV, perfect for family movie nights. The fully stocked kitchen comes with appliances, cookware, and a dining area for group meals.
🛏️ Sleeping arrangements (Sleeps 11 comfortably):
Primary Suite: King bed • Walk-in closet • Ensuite bath with garden tub & shower
Bedroom 2: Queen bed
Bedroom 3: Full-over-full bunk with twin trundle
Living Room: Queen sleeper sofa
Perfect for families, groups, and seniors — no stairs, no fuss, just comfort.
🌊 Resort highlights
Your stay includes access to Maravilla Resort’s private 2.5-acre beach, plus all resort amenities:
🏖 2 pools (one heated)
🎾 Tennis & pickleball courts
🏀 Basketball & shuffleboard
💪 Fitness center & clubhouse
🔥 Community grills & picnic areas
Two gated entrances — from both Scenic Gulf Drive and Highway 98 — make exploring Destin and Miramar Beach effortless.
🌅 Nearby attractions
Pompano Joe’s Beachfront Restaurant (walkable)
Destin Commons, Silver Sands Premium Outlets, and Grand Boulevard (shopping + dining)
Dolphin Reef Snorkeling Site (kayak, paddleboard, or swim — just offshore!)
Golf, boating, and family attractions within minutes
You’re right in the heart of Emerald Coast paradise — close enough to everything, yet tucked away for peace and privacy.
No smoking nor vaping - not allowed on property.
Reach out about monthly pricing options!
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Please feel free to let me know if you have any questions at all!
I hope this helps and I wish the best!
- Dana
