Hi
A few things I've noticed - but feel free to ignore.
This may have already been said so apologies if so but if departures are 3pm, you've essentially lost that room until 12pm the following day so can't maximise its potential.
I love the colours in your bedrooms but in my experience, guests would rather see 4 pillows on a bed with the odd cushion - not 2 pillows and a few cushions.
I think all of your photo's should have a little caption, its an opportunity for you to sell what you have.
Grammar etc needs a little 'fine tuning', especially your heading. I can help with that if you struggle.
Good luck with your venture - I wish you every success.